Dear
Mother and Father
The reason I'm writing this to you is because I would like to raise a cat. I can give you 3 reasons why we should buy a cat and why we can handle it.
The first reason is because cats are calm. Unlike dogs, cats are calm. They aren't as hyper as dogs. They don't chew up the furniture or shoes. Cats usually wander around, barely causing any trouble. Since they are less energetic, it will be easier to take care of them. I can play and take care of the cat without running around and making a mess. Thus, cats will be easy to keep. Maybe I will get more calm and patient when I get a cat.
The second reason is because cats are more hygienic. They don't smell as much as rabbits or hamsters. Also, they take care of their business in the litter box. They're not like dogs that poo anywhere unless trained. Also, cats won't consume a lot of time when training. They are smart and can adapt quickly.
Last but not least, I think we should get a cat because it can be my companion. My brother spends a most of his year at America. So at home, I feel like an only child. If we have a cat, I won't feel as lonely. Cats are cute and even if they aren't, the look majestic. Besides, its fun to watch a cat do something goofy.
Therefore these are reasons why we should buy a cat.
Sincerely
Scott
This letter is pretty convincing. However, I think that it is a bit too short and the conclusion could be more expanded. Other than that, it was pretty good :)
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ReplyDeleteWhen writing a letter the person you are writing to belongs on the same line as "Dear". You have given three reasons in this letter however you need to add research to justify at least one of your reasons.
amazing now im getting a birmin cat
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